Wow, what a great piece of writing with amazing vocabulary. I really like the way you described the dead bodies, it feels as if I'm there, at war. Keep up the great work, David.
What an incredibly descriptive, dramatic piece of writing! I was transported to the battlefield with you. The way in which you described the surrounding sights and sounds of death, paint a very vivid picture.
Thank you for sharing your writing. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up!
Malo David,
ReplyDeleteWow, what a great piece of writing with amazing vocabulary. I really like the way you described the dead bodies, it feels as if I'm there, at war. Keep up the great work, David.
Malo Aupito
Mrs Faalili
Hi Dave
ReplyDeleteWhat an incredibly descriptive, dramatic piece of writing! I was transported to the battlefield with you. The way in which you described the surrounding sights and sounds of death, paint a very vivid picture.
Thank you for sharing your writing. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up!
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I feel like a it a real story
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