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Thursday, 31 May 2018

My hero

This is my other story about My Hero.
I had to describe my hero and tell you's how
he saved me in war.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 May 2018 at 09:47

    Nice piece of writing bro I like the descriptive language in your writing keep it up.

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  2. Miss T.A13 June 2018 at 11:52

    Hi David. This is another FANTASTIC piece of writing! I love how you are able to write in a way that has allowed me, the reader, to feel as if I were there and to evoke such strong emotion.
    Excellent Learning David. Keep it up!
    T.A

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  3. Jacob29 August 2018 at 09:34

    Hi David. This is another FANTASTIC piece of writing! I love how you are able to write in a way that has allowed me, the reader, to feel as if I were there and to evoke such strong emotion.
    Excellent Learning David. Keep it up!

    Kind Regards:Jacob

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